Cross Contour Bone Drawing Critique 

There are certain portions of this pelvic bone drawing that appear to be 3-d, however the right half of the drawing seems to loose dimension. We discussed in critique the issue that I neglected to put long axis lines on the form which probably would have assisted the dimensionality of the form as well as showing the different planes of the bone better. There are certain areas of this drawing in which the value of the line is darker, which I believe works very well when trying to portray dimension. However for the most part, there is not very much variation with line in this drawing. The issue of line variation seemed to be a prevailing issue with each of our group members during the critique. Another issue with this drawing, mentioned during the critique was the use of cross-contour lines. There are shining moments in this drawing with the of cross-contour lines, however I feel all in all I should have played closer attention to the lines. I think that this would have also aided a better in showing more dimension in the right half of the drawing.